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-A <span class="text-hilight">simple interface</span> to view and manage your zones, both internals <span class="text-nowrap">(Bind, ...)</span> and publics <span class="text-nowrap">(OVH, Gandi, ...)</span>.
+A <span class="text-hilight px-1">single interface</span> to view and manage your zones, both internal <span class="text-nowrap">(Bind, ...)</span> and public <span class="text-nowrap">(OVH, Gandi, ...)</span>.
 {{< /usage-lead >}}
 
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Edit your zone files more efficiently."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
->}}
-Whatever the host of your zones, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> displays them in a clear way to limit errors.
+{{< usage-points title="Does this sound familiar?" >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="terminal" title="Two worlds, two workflows" >}}
+SSH and a text editor for the internal zones, a different web console for each public provider. Same records, completely different tools.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="arrow-counterclockwise" title="No undo" >}}
+A bad record propagates in seconds. Recovering means digging through backups or your memory, while the service is down.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="inboxes" title="Every change lands on you" >}}
+You're the only one trusted to touch DNS, so every record request becomes a ticket in your queue.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< /usage-points >}}
 
-By installing happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> next to your Bind or PowerDNS, enjoy the interface without changing your configuration. <span class="text-muted">(coming soon)</span>
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Edit all your zones in one place, internal and public."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
+  alt="A zone displayed the same clear way, whatever the host"
+>}}
+Whatever the host of your zones, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> displays them in the same clear way, limiting errors.
+
+Install happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> next to your Bind or PowerDNS and enjoy the interface without changing your configuration. <span class="text-muted">(coming soon)</span>
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
@@ -25,42 +37,54 @@ By installing happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> next to your Bind or Powe
   flip="true"
   bg="green"
 >}}
-Before publishing your changes, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> shows you what changes will be made. A preview that will avoid many mistakes.
+Before publishing, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> shows you exactly what will change. A preview that avoids many mistakes, on zones where mistakes are expensive.
 
-You can even select which changes you want to release now and which ones should wait.
+You can even select which changes go out now and which ones should wait.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="Share the zone management with your teams or collaborators."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
-  coming_soon="true"
+  title="Full history, instant rollback."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-history.webp"
+  alt="History of every version of a zone"
 >}}
-Whether it's permanent or in preparation for a particular event, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> gives you the ability to collaborate on editing the same area.
+Every version of every zone is kept, with who changed what and when.
 
-Delegate to your teams all or only part of the area, it's up to you.
-{{< /usage-feature >}}
-
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Manage simply, even the special zones."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domains-list.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
-  flip="true"
-  bg="plum"
-  coming_soon="true"
->}}
-Looking for an interface that displays reverse IPv4/IPv6 zones in a human way?
-Or a <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNSBL">Real-time Blockhole List (DNSBL)</a> zone? Or a DNS <a href="https://www.dnsrpz.info/">Response Policy Zones</a> (DNS-RPZ)?
-
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> understands them and allows you to manage them unequivocally.
+When something breaks, you don't reconstruct the previous state from backups: you roll the zone back to it in one click, then investigate calmly.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
   title="Catch problems before they become outages."
   image="/img/screenshots/checks-dashboard.webp"
   alt="Monitoring dashboard showing the status of every check on a domain"
+  flip="true"
+  bg="plum"
 >}}
 With built-in checkers, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> keeps an eye on your domains and zones around the clock: registration expiry, DNSSEC validity, delegation consistency, TLS certificates, response times and more.
 
-Each check is evaluated against clear rules and reported as <span class="fw-bold">OK</span>, <span class="fw-bold">Warning</span> or <span class="fw-bold">Critical</span>, so you can spot what needs attention at a glance, and get notified the moment a check changes state.
+Each check is evaluated against clear rules and reported as <span class="fw-bold">OK</span>, <span class="fw-bold">Warning</span> or <span class="fw-bold">Critical</span>, so you spot what needs attention at a glance and get notified the moment a check changes state.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Share zone management with your teams."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract-records.webp"
+  alt="Zone management shared between teams"
+  coming_soon="true"
+>}}
+Whether it's permanent or in preparation for a particular event, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> lets several people collaborate on the same zone.
+
+Delegate all or only part of a zone, down to a single record. The routine requests leave your queue; the control stays with you.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Manage simply, even the special zones."
+  image="/img/screenshots/service-caa.webp"
+  alt="Editing an advanced DNS service through a guided form"
+  flip="true"
+  bg="green"
+  coming_soon="true"
+>}}
+Looking for an interface that displays reverse IPv4/IPv6 zones in a human way?
+Or a <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNSBL">Real-time Blackhole List (DNSBL)</a> zone? Or DNS <a href="https://www.dnsrpz.info/">Response Policy Zones</a> (DNS-RPZ)?
+
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> understands them and lets you manage them unequivocally.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}