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 {{< usage-lead >}}
-An interface to <span class="text-hilight">keep your independence</span> on the web.
+An <span class="text-hilight px-1">open-source interface</span> to keep your <span class="text-hilight px-1">independence</span> on the web.
 {{< /usage-lead >}}
 
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Discover a simple and clear interface."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
->}}
-Whatever the host of your zones, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> displays them in a clear way to limit errors.
+{{< usage-points title="Does this sound familiar?" >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="house-gear" title="Self-hosted, except DNS" >}}
+Your mail, your cloud, your git are on your own servers. But your DNS still lives in a closed registrar console you don't control.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="exclamation-triangle" title="One typo from disaster" >}}
+Raw zone files are unforgiving. A missing dot, a wrong TTL, and your mail silently vanishes for hours before you notice.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="lock" title="Locked into a provider" >}}
+Each registrar's interface decides what you can do and how. Moving your zones elsewhere means relearning everything.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< /usage-points >}}
 
-By installing happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> next to your Bind or PowerDNS, enjoy the interface without changing your configuration.
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="A simple and clear interface, whatever the host."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
+  alt="A zone displayed in a clear, human-readable way"
+>}}
+Whether your zones live at a registrar or on your own servers, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> displays them the same clear way, limiting errors.
+
+Install happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> next to your Bind or PowerDNS and enjoy the interface without changing your configuration.
 <span class="text-muted">(coming soon)</span>
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="Self-hosting made easy."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
+  title="Self-hosting made easy, even for DNS."
+  image="/img/screenshots/providers-list.webp"
+  alt="List of supported providers, from cloud services to self-hosted servers"
   flip="true"
   bg="green"
 >}}
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> allows you with the same interface to manage your DNS zone with a third party provider, or to manage your own DNS servers.
+With the same interface, manage your zone at a third-party provider or run your own DNS servers. Your domains, your rules.
 
-Don't be afraid to edit a zone text file, we take care of it!
+Don't be afraid of editing a zone text file: we take care of it.
 
-Our solution doesn't need a lot of resources and can be used on a Raspberry Pi. Or even be launched only when needed.
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> is open source, needs very few resources, runs happily on a Raspberry Pi, and can even be launched only when needed.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="Meet all your needs in all simplicity."
+  title="Tinker without fear: preview, history, rollback."
+  image="/img/screenshots/zone-diff.webp"
+  alt="Review and confirm the changes that will be applied"
+>}}
+Before any change is published, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> shows you exactly what will be modified and asks for confirmation. No more silent typos.
+
+And since every version of your zone is kept in history, you can experiment freely and roll back in one click if something goes wrong.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Set up any service in all simplicity."
   image="/img/screenshots/domain-services.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
+  alt="Services attached to a domain, described in plain words"
+  flip="true"
+  bg="plum"
 >}}
 A new service? An urgent fix? happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> uses simple terminology to stay focused on the expected result.
 
-We are committed to providing the latest in DNS registration and services.
+We are committed to providing the latest in DNS registration and services, so your setup never lags behind the standards.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
   title="Manage easily, even special zones."
   image="/img/screenshots/service-caa.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
-  flip="true"
-  bg="plum"
+  alt="Editing an advanced DNS service through a guided form"
   coming_soon="true"
 >}}
 Looking for an interface that displays reverse IPv4/IPv6 zones in a human way?
-Or a <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNSBL">Real-time Blockhole List (DNSBL)</a> zone? Or a DNS <a href="https://www.dnsrpz.info/">Response Policy Zones</a> (DNS-RPZ)?
+Or a <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DNSBL">Real-time Blackhole List (DNSBL)</a> zone? Or DNS <a href="https://www.dnsrpz.info/">Response Policy Zones</a> (DNS-RPZ)?
 
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> understands them and allows you to manage them unequivocally.
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> understands them and lets you manage them unequivocally.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}