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content/use-happyDomain/freelance.en.md

@@ -5,54 +5,72 @@ layout = "usage"
 +++
 
 {{< usage-lead >}}
-A <span class="text-hilight">unified interface</span> to manage all your clients' domains. Everything you need.
+<span class="text-hilight px-1">All your clients' domains</span> in one interface. Spend your time on billable work, <span class="text-hilight px-1">not on registrar consoles</span>.
 {{< /usage-lead >}}
 
+{{< usage-points title="Does this sound familiar?" >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="key" title="A vault full of logins" >}}
+Each client came with their own registrar, their own account, their own credentials. Finding the right login takes longer than the change itself.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="window-stack" title="A different console every time" >}}
+OVH today, GoDaddy tomorrow, Cloudflare next week. Each interface has its own logic, and each one is a new chance to make a mistake on a client's zone.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="telephone" title="The client calls first" >}}
+An expired domain, broken mail, an invalid certificate. Too often, the person who notices is the client paying you to prevent exactly that.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< /usage-points >}}
+
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="All domain names grouped by customer."
+  title="All your clients' domains, grouped by client."
   image="/img/screenshots/domains-list.webp"
   alt="List of domain names, cleverly grouped by client"
 >}}
-No matter how many customers you follow, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> always gives you a clear overview.
+No matter how many clients you follow, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> gives you a clear overview of every domain you are responsible for, organized your way.
+
+One login, one inventory, no more digging through password managers to answer a simple question.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="Forget about the complexity of each hosting company. Take advantage of our unified interface."
+  title="One interface, whatever your client's provider."
   image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
+  alt="A zone displayed the same way, whatever the provider behind it"
   flip="true"
   bg="green"
 >}}
-Don't be afraid of discovering a new host. happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> manages over 25 hosts worldwide. Your customers are probably using them.
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> manages over 25 hosts worldwide. Your clients are probably using them already.
+
+Every zone is displayed and edited the same way, so a new client with an exotic registrar is no longer a problem: you already know the interface.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="Respond to all requests with ease."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-services.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
->}}
-A new service? An urgent fix? happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> uses simple terminology to stay focused.
-{{< /usage-feature >}}
-
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Share the management of the area with your client, his teams or your collaborators."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
-  alt="Liste des domaines, regroupés astucieusement par client"
-  flip="true"
-  bg="plum"
-  coming_soon="true"
->}}
-Whether it is permanent or in preparation for a particular event, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> offers you the possibility to collaborate on the editing of the same area.
-
-Delegate to your client's teams all or only part of the area, it's up to you.
-{{< /usage-feature >}}
-
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Never let a client's domain expire unnoticed."
+  title="Fix issues before your client even notices."
   image="/img/screenshots/checks-dashboard.webp"
   alt="Monitoring dashboard showing the status of every check on a client domain"
 >}}
 happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span>'s built-in checkers keep watch over every client domain: expiry dates, DNSSEC, mail and web service availability, TLS certificates and more, all reported with a clear <span class="fw-bold">OK</span> / <span class="fw-bold">Warning</span> / <span class="fw-bold">Critical</span> status.
 
-Get notified the moment something changes, fix it before your client even notices, and show up looking like the expert they hired.
+Get notified the moment something changes, fix it quietly, and show up looking like the expert they hired.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Respond to every request with ease."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-services.webp"
+  alt="Services attached to a domain, described in plain words"
+  flip="true"
+  bg="plum"
+>}}
+A new website? Mail to set up? An urgent fix? happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> uses simple, service-oriented terminology, so you go straight to the result your client asked for.
+
+Less time decoding record types, more time delivering.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Collaborate on a zone with your client or your team."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
+  alt="Zone management shared with clients and collaborators"
+  coming_soon="true"
+>}}
+Whether it's permanent or in preparation for a specific event, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> lets several people work on the same zone.
+
+Delegate to your client's team all or only part of the zone, down to a single record. They handle the routine, you keep the keys.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}