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 {{< usage-lead >}}
-An interface to <span class="text-hilight">regain control</span> of your domains<br>
-and <span class="text-hilight">forget frictions</span> of their management.
+Your organization's domains, <span class="text-hilight px-1">fully visible</span>, <span class="text-hilight px-1">under control</span> and <span class="text-hilight px-1">auditable</span>, whoever the providers are.
 {{< /usage-lead >}}
 
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Keep track of every change with the built-in history."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domain-logs.webp"
-  alt="Domain logs showing change history"
->}}
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> allows you to go back at any time in case of a problem.
+{{< usage-points title="Does this sound familiar?" >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="diagram-3" title="Scattered everywhere" >}}
+Domains spread across registrars, cloud accounts and legacy hosts. Nobody has the full picture until something breaks.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="person-lock" title="Locked behind one person" >}}
+Every DNS change waits for the one engineer who holds the registrar credentials. A bottleneck, and a single point of failure.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< usage-point icon="eye-slash" title="Failures found by users" >}}
+An expired domain, a broken delegation, a forgotten subdomain still pointing at a decommissioned server, all discovered in production.
+{{< /usage-point >}}
+{{< /usage-points >}}
 
-The history allows you to easily track the latest changes, keeping track of who made them.
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="See your entire domain portfolio in one place."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domains-list.webp"
+  alt="List of domains from several providers, grouped by need"
+>}}
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> connects to more than 25 hosting providers worldwide: registrars, cloud DNS, CDNs and your on-premise servers.
+
+Import a provider in one click and get a single, always up-to-date inventory of every domain your organization owns. No more spreadsheets, no more guessing which account holds what.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}
 
 {{< usage-feature
-  title="Share the management of zones between your teams."
+  title="Catch incidents before your users do."
+  image="/img/screenshots/checks-dashboard.webp"
+  alt="Monitoring dashboard showing the status of every check on a domain"
+  flip="true"
+  bg="green"
+>}}
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span>'s checkers continuously watch over your whole portfolio: expirations, DNSSEC, delegation, certificates and service availability, with a clear status for each domain.
+
+Your teams are notified the moment something changes state. Silent failures become actionable alerts, before they become outages.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Review every change before it reaches production."
+  image="/img/screenshots/zone-diff.webp"
+  alt="Review and confirm the changes that will be applied"
+>}}
+No change is applied blindly: happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> shows the exact difference between the current zone and the new one, and asks for confirmation.
+
+A typo in a record no longer takes a service down. Your team sees what will change, validates it, then deploys. It works like a code review, for your DNS.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="A full audit trail, and a way back."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-logs.webp"
+  alt="Domain logs showing change history"
+  flip="true"
+  bg="plum"
+>}}
+Every modification is recorded: what changed, when, and who made it. When an auditor (or an incident) asks "who touched this zone?", the answer is one click away.
+
+And because the entire history is kept, you can roll any zone back to a previous state at any time.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="Delegate to your teams, without losing control."
   image="/img/screenshots/domain-abstract.webp"
   alt="Zone management shared between teams"
+  coming_soon="true"
+>}}
+Let each team manage the records related to its own projects, internal or public, instead of queuing tickets to a central admin.
+
+happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span>'s fine-grained access control lets you delegate all or part of a zone, down to a single record. Teams move fast; you keep the oversight.
+{{< /usage-feature >}}
+
+{{< usage-feature
+  title="No more forgotten subdomains."
+  image="/img/screenshots/domain-services.webp"
+  alt="Services attached to a domain, each with a clear purpose"
   flip="true"
   bg="green"
   coming_soon="true"
 >}}
-Reduce friction between your teams by allowing them to manage records related to their projects (internal or even public).
+Document the purpose of every subdomain, and set an expiration date on temporary ones: a marketing event, a demo, a test environment.
 
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> implements a powerful access control system allowing you to delegate all or part of a zone, up to the recording.
-{{< /usage-feature >}}
-
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Centralize and synchronize your domain portfolios."
-  image="/img/screenshots/domains-list.webp"
-  alt="List of domains grouped by need"
->}}
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> connects to more than 25 hosting providers worldwide. You can manage them in the interface with one click.
-{{< /usage-feature >}}
-
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Keep track of the purpose of each sub-domain."
-  image="/img/screenshots/zone-diff.webp"
-  alt="Review and confirm the changes that will be applied"
-  flip="true"
-  bg="plum"
-  coming_soon="true"
->}}
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> allows you to set an expiration date on your subdomains so that a temporary event and its servers do not remain accessible, simply because a closing ticket has not been processed. We take care of it automatically.
-{{< /usage-feature >}}
-
-{{< usage-feature
-  title="Stay ahead of incidents with continuous monitoring."
-  image="/img/screenshots/checks-dashboard.webp"
-  alt="Monitoring dashboard showing the status of every check on a domain"
->}}
-happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span>'s checkers continuously watch over your organization's domains (expirations, DNSSEC, delegation, certificates and service availability) and surface a clear status for each one.
-
-Your teams get notified as soon as something changes state, turning silent failures into actionable alerts and giving you peace of mind over your whole portfolio.
+When the date comes, happy<span class="fw-bold">Domain</span> cleans up automatically. Stale records pointing at decommissioned servers (the classic path to subdomain takeover) simply stop accumulating.
 {{< /usage-feature >}}